Choosing Your Words

Words are powerful. They can make or break a piece of writing. The right words can shape your text into something powerful or reduce it to cosmic failure. Word choice involves repetition and complexity of meaning that can either enhance a piece or destroy it.

That’s not to say that you should spend hours looking for just the right word. There is balance to the process. Get the thought out first and then revise it to find the right words. The right words are not those that are rarely strung together in sentences. They are the right words for the job they have to do. Always remember writing has a job to do and that job is to communicate clearly. I’m currently revising a novel where I have two instances of two character’s names in one scene. One instance of one of the character names has the job of informing the reader who is in the scene. The other is near the end of the scene and it just feels right that it is there. I left both instances of that name in place because otherwise I would have gotten tangled up in pronouns. The other name has one instance establishing who the characters are talking about. The other is also keeping the scene clear and out of a ball of tangled instances of the pronoun, he. Sometimes you just have to repeat words.

You also don’t want to use too many synonyms for a word. In the scene I mention above one character tried to cast a spell on another character and it didn’t work. She is talking to her teacher about why the incantation didn’t work. I’ve used two synonyms there, spell and incantation, because in the context those words are interchangeable. I could have used the word hex, but that carries a negative connotation that I didn’t want. I need a way to talk about the spell without mentioning what it is. Word choice is important.

Each piece is different. In that story, one of the minor characters is a child. I have to make sure that her dialog is neither too old for her or two young. It’s a fine line and it has been a long time since I was twelve. I keep her sentences short and simple, with shorter, more common words. I examine each line of her dialog to ensure that she isn’t talking baby talk while at the same time she doesn’t sound like a college professor. My word choice for her is both complicated and easy. Reading the work aloud lets me hear the dialog to determine if it is pompous or baby talk.

That’s the best way to do it, just read the text aloud or have your computer read it to you. Listen with your eyes closed and you will see your characters. You will also hear words that may not be quite right in the text. Change them and do the reading again. It really is the best way to revise your word choices. It’s also good for finding typos. Rewrite anything that sounds wrong or pompous. Good luck.


I am not one who is comfortable talking about myself but here goes. I enjoy writing, family history, and reading. I decided to do this blog because I wanted to try something new. I decided to make it a weekly blog because I wasn't sure that I could keep up with a daily one, and monthly seemed like I was writing a magazine. I think I did ok with my choices. You'll notice that there are not a lot of graphics on my site. That's because there are graphics plastered everywhere on the Internet and those sites sometimes take forever to load. This blog is a place where you can kick back, relax and be ready to be amused. At least I hope I willbamuse you. This blog is on a variety of subjects from my ficitional cat agency, the FFL, which is monthly, to instructional blogs to editorials, which are my opinions only. I admit that I don't know everything and could be wrong -- I frequently am. Now, stop reading about me and read what I have to say!

Tagged with: , , , , ,
Posted in General Opinion, Writing Techniques

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s


Enter your email address to subscribe to this blog and receive notifications of new posts by email.

Join 248 other subscribers
© Lisa Hendrickson and Pebblepup's Writing Den, 2010-2017. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Lisa Hendrickson and Pebblepup's Writing Den with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
%d bloggers like this: